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The light slowly crept through a nearby open window moving it's way across the bed to where Jack was sleeping, the light of the new day being a sudden intrusion upon his peaceful sleep. His eyes flickered open slowly attempting to adjust themselves to the morning light. He raised his hand to try and block it out, lowering it after a few moments and looking around, he ran his hands through the soft fur beneath him. Turning himself over onto his stomach, he raised his head to look at the gigantic face of Lyla. She was already awake and smiling softly down at him, she was wearing a black pajama top that covered her chest, leaving her stomach exposed, she also wore a short, black set of pants to match the top. "Good morning my little pet," she spoke down to him, he was lying down on her belly fur. "Good morning miss," he replied whilst running his hands through the soft fur that surrounded him. Lyla moved a hand down towards Jack, gently nuzzling his tiny body with her claws. "Did you sleep well little one?" she stretched her body out, flexing her arms and legs. Jack rolled himself over almost instantly to greet the claws as best he could, hugging them tightly and replying, "Yes I did miss. Your fur is so soft and comfortable, it makes the perfect bed. I wouldn't mind sleeping here with you more often." He looked up directly at Lyla with a big grin on his face before returning to hug her claws. Lyla giggled a little, still nuzzling Jack with her claws, "well we certainly will, I was hoping you would enjoy your stay with me." She moved her other hand over, gripping Jack with the utmost care between her claws, she lifted him up and set him down in her palm, bringing it up to her face. "You can always have peace of mind when your with me little one, your welcome to live here with me if you choose to. Just be careful of my sister, she does not have the same gentle tendencies towards your kind like I do." She stuck her tongue out and gave Jack a few tender licks. "I would very much like to stay with you, I'm just afraid of what your telling me about your sister," Jack replied fearfully. Lyla smiled down softly back at him and nuzzled him with a claw again. "As long as your with me you should have nothing to worry about, I'm just a bit scared about leaving you here alone," she gazed down at Jack, a hint of fear in her voice as she spoke, the thoughts of what her sister would do to him if she found him alone.

A moment passed before Jack broke the silence, "it will be OK, we can work it out miss. Would you like me to pick up where we left off from yesterday?" He turned his gaze down to Lyla's paws, he couldn't hep but stare at them for a few moments. He shook his head and quickly glanced back to Lyla. She was already smiling down at him, giggling softly, "I think we would both enjoy that," she replied, giving him a soft kiss before lowering her hand down placing it flat on the bed next to her paws. Jack jumped down off her hand landing gently on the sheet fabric beneath him. He gazed towards the paws resting on the bed before him, Lyla had already positioned herself comfortably on the bed, resting her back against the wooden panel of her bed. Her paws were lying down on their sides exposing the pads of her paws so Jack could work on them better. He approached her paws, placing his hands on the pads, gently rubbing his hands up and down against them. Lyla reacted immediately to his touch, flexing her toes and purring softly as he continued. "You know, your really good at this, I'm glad you want to stay here with me. It's difficult to find little paw lovers like yourself, your a rare breed little one. Oh, one more thing, call me Lyla, you don't have to keep referring to me as 'miss'." Lyla spoke with an affectionate tone in her voice. Jack increased the pressure in one hand against her the pad in front of him, moving the other along the pad to the exposed fur between her sole and toe pads and running his hand through it. "Thank you Lyla, your so lovely and gentle. I've never experienced such kindness before and I couldn't be happier with my decision." Jack pushed his body against Lyla's sole attempting to hug it as best he could, burying his face into the fur between the pads of her paws. Lyla slid herself further down the bed, bringing her head to rest on the soft pillows that surrounded her. Jack proceeded to walk towards her paws, his gaze following down Lyla's legs, still following down towards her paws. Lyla still had them lying on their sides, her eyes were closed awaiting for Jack to continue working. Jack approached her toes and placed both his hands on them, running his fingers through the fur, moving back and forth along the toe, gently caressing it. Lyla let out another soft moan, wiggling and flexing her toes to Jack's touch. Jack lowered his hands down and pushed them against the pad of her toe, rubbing his hands along the soft pad to please Lyla. "Your doing such a wonderful job my pet, it feels so good," she purred, a smile forming on her face, "if there's anything I can do for you, please tell me."

Jack ceased his work on her paws, stepping aside to look down the length of Lyla's body towards her face. Lyla opened her eyes as the feeling on her paws had stopped, she sat herself up, looking down towards Jack with an inquisitive look on her face. She sat upright, bringing her legs close to her, she crawled forward, lowering her chest down on the bed slowly, her face now in front of Jack and her legs crossed it the air behind her. "Are you OK?" she stared down at him with a curious look on her face. Jack was rubbing his hands together nervously, looking up into her emerald green eyes, "I was wondering if... if you could call me by my name, it feels a little degrading being called 'pet' and 'little one'," he broke eye contact nervously. Lyla smiled towards him, bringing her hands forward and gently placing them on the bed in front of Jack, moving one forward and gently patting him with a finger pad, "Of course Jack, I didn't mean to make you uncomfortable in any way," she spoke with an affectionate tone. Jack smiled, closing his eyes as the finger touched the top of his head, he opened them after a few seconds looking back up to Lyla, "Thank you Lyla, thank you for everything." Lyla gently scooped Jack into her palm, sitting herself up on the edge of the bed, planting her paws firmly on the ground, looking down at Jack in her hand, "Would you like something to eat Jack?" she asked with a smile. Jack stared up at her and replied, "Yes Lyla, I could go for something right now." Jack seated himself comfortably in Lyla's hand, still looking up towards her. Lyla stood herself up, looking down at Jack in her hand, "So could I, let's go," Lyla started walking, moving towards the door, opening it and walking out, closing it behind her. Jack, purposely fell backwards in her palm, staring up at Lyla's face as she walked, she looked down straight back at him, the two exchanging smiles. Jack knew he was going to like it here, living with Lyla, it was more than he could ever ask for and he was determined to enjoy every second of it.
My first ever thought out story, I worked on it for a little bit and I'm quite happy with how it came out.

I'd like to know what you think of it, enjoy. :)

Second chapter here [link]
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OverLordRay Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
What is English term for this? I am feeling... in American accent I think is called.. uh how you say...
ENCORE BRAVO FELICIMO, Ah I love it! Bring on another one of these its truly was a joy to read this even though its now 2, but who cares! :D

also everything on the first line I said was in a Russian accent since mine is so thick you'd think I was making fun of us....sadly its just the stereotypical one....and no I don't mean the one you can hide I mean the Weird Al Yankovic obvious one everyone laughs at... good thing most of what I say is a joke irl but here I have ENGLISH words yay!
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FuryRider Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
I'm really glad this story turned out this way, I didn't expect it to turn out so well but I think I will make up a further story line for it.

Also, you lost me on the second lines of your comment, heh.
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OverLordRay Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
It was MEANT to lose you! lol
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FuryRider Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
-Poker face- ....Touche....
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OverLordRay Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
:icongagaplz: I see what you did there.
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Daxx-Lorenzo Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
BRILIENT!!, PLEASE write more, PLEASE
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FuryRider Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
Thank you, I plan to do more in the future.
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ManiakMonkey Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Cute, I love gentle stories so I thought it was pretty well done :D
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FuryRider Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
Heh thanks, as my first I didn't expect it to turn out as well as I had hoped, but I guess it turned out better. Thanks again. :)
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ManiakMonkey Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are most welcome :D
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